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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ indias-greener-future- electric-vehicle-evs-zero- carbon-emission-7649708/ - In the intro, mention that India is among a handful of countries that supports the global EV30@30 campaign.
- In the body, mention the opportunities for India in the development of battery storage such as promoting sustainable development, economic opportunities, saving foreign exchange reserves, energy security etc.
- In the measures mention FAME II, PLI for Advanced Chemistry Cells, PLI scheme for Auto and Automotive Components etc.
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Intro is fine, can mention status of electric vehicle sales, EV30@30 campaign..instead of ‘cater to the aspect of global warming’ , use ‘reduce the effect of global warming’.
Mention opportunities..you have repeated schemes in both parts..mention about creation of jobs..other economic opportunities like establishment of manufacturing industries..reduction in fuel import bill, step towards meeting Paris Conference climate targets etc
Govt schemes..it will be good if you can mention some features too.
Keep practicing, work upon the content. 🙂
Q.3 The global electric mobility revolution is today defined by the rapid growth in electric vehicle (EV) uptake. In the context of this, examine the opportunities offered by the battery storage revolution for India and discuss the measures taken by India to promote the EV ecosystem in India. (10 Marks)
Q.3 The global electric mobility revolution is today defined by the rapid growth in electric vehicle (EV) uptake. In the context of this, examine the opportunities offered by the battery storage revolution for India and discuss the measures taken by India to promote the EV ecosystem in India. (10 Marks)
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Your answer is fine. Intro is good, if you can mention some data regarding status of current EV sales, it will be better.
Content is good, you can also mention about reduction in import bill, more forex reserves due to less import of oil/gas resources. Other points are fine.
Govt. schemes mentioned are fine. However, EV30@30 is a global campaign, not Indian.
Conclusion is okay.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Muskan
Nice answer. Presentation is good, content is fine too. Well-written intro. Most points have been covered in opportunities.
While writing about schemes, it will be better if you can mention some features or money invested by the government in these initiatives.
Conclusion is nice.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Shubham
Intro is fine but if you can mention some policy initiative or EV30@30 campaign, it will be better.
Points under opportunity are good, mention economic opportunity too..job creation,manufacturing of advanced batteries etc
Measures are fine but you have missed some flagship schemes like FAME II, PLI for Advanced Chemistry Cells, PLI scheme for Auto and Automotive Components etc.
Conclusion is good, keep practicing. 🙂