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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ sushil-kumar-modi-writes-a- skewed-playing-field-e- commerce-online-aggregator- platforms-business-7994805/ - In the intro, mention the rising dominance of e-commerce in the country.
- In the body, mention the issues such as predatory pricing, exclusionary practices, distortion of the market, cartelisation, information asymmetry, lack of dispute resolution mechanisms etc. In the suggestions mention the need for comprehensive rules and regulations, act on the lines of Digital Markets Act of the EU etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the regulation of the sector to protect the interests of the consumers.
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Deepika
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Intro is fine, you could mention some data point for better impact such as e-commerce market expected to grow to US$ 200 billion by 2026.
Problems mentioned are fine, some more points could be included such as privacy issue(aggregators gather shopping habits, consumer preferences, and other personal data) ; greater visibility to select sellers; lack of dispute redressal mechanisms; unreasonable and one-sided contracts etc. Example used in cartelisation point could be better(oyo-make my trip collusion which was investigated by CCI), random allegations need to be substantiated.
Way forward and conclusion are decent.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Hello
You have written a pretty generic answer.
In intro, you could mention some data point for better impact such as e-commerce market expected to grow to US$ 200 billion by 2026.
In shortcomings multiple points could be mentioned- look at the issue both from point of view of customers as well as brick and mortar retailers- you could mention predatory pricing, cashbacks and deep discounts, loaded in the favour of big players, partisanship in giving select sellers more visibility, cartelisation, lack of a fair dispute redressal mechanism etc. Points about privacy and fraud are fine.
Next mention a proper way forward as question has asked to talk about solutions- points such as the need for comprehensive rules and regulations, acting on the lines of Digital Markets Act of the EU etc. could be added along with what you have written.
Keep practicing. Go through the article attached above and read some other answers too. 🙂
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Chandan
This is a 10 marker, so focus should be given on those sections which are exclusively asked. Here, more focus should be on issues and solutions.
Introduction is fine, you could mention some data point for better impact such as e-commerce market expected to grow to US$ 200 billion by 2026.
Benefits could be made concise, you can use a hub-spoke diagram or a flowchart.
In issues, some points are fine, but some points are missing-predatory pricing, cashbacks and deep discounts, loaded in the favour of big players, cartelisation, lack of a fair dispute redressal mechanism, privacy issues etc
Way forward is fine, model agreement that is fair and allows a level playing field between the aggregators and their business partners such as the Digital Markets Act of the EU; grievance redressal etc could be talked about too.
A conclusion could be written.
Keep practicing. Go through the article attached above. 🙂
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Naveen
Good attempt. Introduction is good, you could mention some data point for better impact such as e-commerce market expected to grow to US$ 200 billion by 2026.
Benefits are fine, good use of diagram.
Issues mentioned are also good, in cartelisation you could link with recent case of collusion between Oyo-Make my trip, will link the answer with current affairs.
Steps taken and way forward are fine too.
Overall, your understanding is good and you have written well.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Payal
Nice attempt, you have written well. Both content and presentation are fine.
Introduction is good, a small section on benefits could be added after that but keep it very brief.
Issues mentioned are fine, can link it with current affairs at places such as the recent case of collusion between Oyo-Make my trip. Unreasonable and one-sided contracts could also be talked about. This allows big e-commerce plyers to offer services at a much cheaper rate but bars the retailers from doing so.
Solutions mentioned are also fine.
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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