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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ farmers-protest-india-farm- laws-7607697/lite/ - In the intro mention the issue of various definitions of farmers in India.
- In the body mention various number of farmers in India arrived at by different methodologies in India. In the challenges mention selecting specific criteria and issues with it. In the next part mention policy implications such as inefficiency, difficulty in framing targeted measures etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to address the issue by defining farmer and arriving at specific number.
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Siddharth
Decent attempt, introduction is fine. Content is also good, however, also discuss about the methodology given in the article(designating farmers as those having 50% income from crop cultivation) and the drawbacks associated with it. Rest of the points are okay.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Nandhini,
Nice attempt, intro is good. In the body mention the different methods for e.g agriculture census, designating farmers as those having atleast 50% income from crop cultivation, PM-KISAN method etc to make the answer more specific. Otherwise points are good.
The answer ends a bit abruptly, you can mention a short conclusion with a forward-looking suggestion.
Keep writing. 🙂
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