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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/can- socially-responsible- investing-save-the-world- 7686043/ - In the intro, mention that there has been a growing trend of making investment decisions on basis of social and environmental standards.
- In the body mention how investment decisions are being made considering the impact of investment on climate change and the environment. In the next part, mention how corporates are adopting practices that reduce the environmental impact.
- Conclude by mentioning that it is not excessively optimistic to view SRI as the beginning of a potentially powerful movement that could yet reform capitalism from within.
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Karan
Introduction is good.
Challenges can be mentioned in the later part of the answer.
Rather mention some challenges the world is facing such as environmental, pandemic , inequality etc
Next part about how SRI can help address the problems is good, after that you can mention challenges and a way forward.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Nandhini
Good attempt.
Introduction is good.
Challenges mentioned are also fine, you can also add a point about pandemic and it’s repercussions.
Next part is very good.
You have addressed comprehensively, examples mentioned are also fine.
Conclusion is good.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Muskan
Introduction is fine, also include environmental angle while defining SRIs
Examples mentioned are good, current affairs has been linked well.
Also mention some of the challenges the world is facing- environmental, social, pandemic before mentioning how SRI can help to tackle them.
You can also link it with India’s net zero commitments madde in Glasgow.
Points mentioned by you are good.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂