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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ breathing-life-into-the- climate-narrative-climate- change-modi-cop26-8071495/ - In the intro, mention the launch of the initiative/
- In the body mention the important role individuals and community can play in climate action. In the next part write about the LiFE initiative and how it can compel the world to consume responsible, produce responsibly and live responsibly.
- Conclude by mentioning that the time is ripe for India to lead the LiFE movement and mainstream it into the climate narrative.
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Hello
This is a GS4 answer.
Your attempt is decent, introduction is good.
Probity mostly relates to preventing corruption, so that part can be focused upon a bit.
Government measures are fine, prevention of corruption act, whistleblower protection act etc also can be mentioned.
Conclusion is decent.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Sowmya
Decent attempt.
Introduction is fine and the initiative has been explained well. Examples are also good.
However, you can mention some more things- why the initiative was launched- you can use a flowchart to write a few points such as global warming, economic losses, impact on humans etc
Next, some points about the features of the movement can also be mentioned. Such as unified global goals, 3P’s (pro-planet people), distinct global call, innovation etc
Rest of the explanation in your answer is decent enough, conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂
3.5/10