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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/op-ed/does-india-have- a-right-to-burn-fossil-fuels/ article37427874.ece - In the intro mention India’s net zero emission commitment.
- In the body, mention issues with coal based developement trajectory.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to reduce dependence on coal.
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Siddharth,
Intro is good. Arguments in favour of phasing out coal are also fine; however also suggest some advantages of alternatives(renewable)- on the basis of cost, domestic availability, reliability,lesser expenditure on imports.
Your points are fine but they are more like way forward; first establish that we can do without coal by giving practical economic comparison and then mention these.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Hello
In intro, mention COP26, target 2070 etc for better effect. Also, need to work a bit upon content. Points are quite generic…more like way forward. First, mention advantages and disadvantages of coal vis-a-vis renewables on the basis of economics or practicability such as cost; imports; reliability; domestic availability etc and then mention the points you have written. Finally, come to a conclusion.
You have written a balanced conclusion; that is nice.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Nandhini
Introduction is fine, it is a bit long, you can make it concise. Current approach part is also fine. However, after that mention that we need not depend on coal and can scale down..it will be good if you can show comparison between coal and alternative forms of energy on the basis of practical things like cost, reliability, domestic availability etc to substantiate your point.
After that, way forward is fine. Conclusion is also good.
Keep writing. 🙂