Mentor’s comment-
- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ unesco-stats-on-global- expenditure-on-r-d-7775626/ - In the intro, mention India’s low spending on GDP.
- In the body mention importance of spending on R&D. In the next part, mention provisions in Budget and role of private sector etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to increase spending on R&D.
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Karun
Good attempt. Content is good, you have used data to substantiate your points, presentation is also fine.
Introduction is good, you can draw the graph showing decreasing spending in R&D for better impact.
Importance part is also well written, further need to increase linkage between industry, academia and public sector can be mentioned, briefly mention can also be made of taking a lead in sunrise industries like AI, geospatial systems and drones, semiconductors, space, genomics and pharmaceuticals, green energy etc
Suggestions are fine, increasing state spending to 2% of GDP should be mentioned first, institutional measures like strengthening SERB, establishment of NRF as suggested in NEP.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. You are writing well. 🙂
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Likhitha
Good attempt, presentation is nice, content is also fine.
Introduction is good, you can draw the graph showing decreasing spending in R&D for better impact.
Nice use of flowchart for showing importance. Can also link it with Atmanirbhar Bharat -spending on R&D can prove to be a vital cog.
Suggestions are good, conclusion is fine too.
Keep practicing. 🙂