Mentor’s comment-
- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ artificial-intelligence- technologies-have-climate- cost-7753829/ - In the intro, explain the AI technology.
- In the body mention the advantages the technology could offer such as time-saving, execution of the complex task, it can operate 24×7 without downtime, mass-market potential etc. In the concerns mention bias, privacy, inequality safety, environmental impact etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to pay attention to the concerns while deploying the technology.
Ih6EGuGI7Z0usf
Jyoti
Good attempt. You have addressed the question comprehensively.
Intro first para is fine.
After that mention examples of auto driven cars, robots etc and make the 2nd para concise. No need to mention name of FM etc.
Advantages mentioned are good. You can also mention that AI has immense applications in sectors like manufacturing, agriculture, healthcare, education and logistics and give some examples.
Concerns mentioned are good. Conclusion is also fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
5.5/10
ID- Ir1zuLIKkQ1gwr
Karun
Introduction and advantages part is good. Reference to the sector as sunrise in budget can be mentioned.
Applications mentioned and examples are also good.
In advantages the capability to operate 24×7 without downtime, mass-market potential etc can also be mentioned.
You have mentioned some concerns, but some important ones are missing like impact on environment; difference between developed and developing countries with regards to research and development, resources and governance will further exacerbate inequality; privacy concerns.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
Razor Id-le7g8rZjJGeMT5