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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/weighing-in-on- indias-investment-led-revival/ article65678946.ece - In the intro, mention that India’s long term growth prospects are embedded in public capital expenditure programs.
- In the body mention that significant part in investment is in the form of public investment and as a result important driver of growth. In the next part mention that there is not significant change in the distribution as mentioned in the article.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for balance between “directly productive investments” (in farms and factories) and infrastructure investments.
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Introduction is fine.
Importance part is also decent, but too much focus on welfare has been given… Better you can talk about how investment leads to trickle down, employment etc. Crowding in of private investment taking the lead of public investment can be mentioned. PM garib kalyan and Ayushman Bharat are more of social welfare policies than investment to spur economic growth.
In next part some data needs to be mentioned, you can talk about investment sector wise that is agriculture, manufacturing and services.
Also, some concerns such as stagnant financing, decreasing foreign contribution, overstressing one segment that is roads and communication and disequilibrium in development can be mentioned.
Before concluding you can also mention a brief way forward.. talking about increasing capex, focus needs to be shifted towards allocation of monetary resources to assets that are expected to yield some gain or return over a given period of time such as real estate etc rather than just increasing the stock of real capital in a country.
Keep practicing, try to read up a bit more on the topic. 🙂
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First part of your answer is good. Introduction is fine, benefits of public investment are also listed out. You can also talk about crowding in of private investment too.
However, in next part some data needs to be mentioned, you can talk about investment sector wise that is agriculture, manufacturing and services.
Also, some concerns such as stagnant financing, decreasing foreign contribution, overstressing one segment that is roads and communication and disequilibrium in development can be mentioned.
Before concluding you can also mention a brief way forward.. talking about increasing capex, focus needs to be shifted towards allocation of monetary resources to assets that are expected to yield some gain or return over a given period of time such as real estate etc rather than just increasing the stock of real capital in a country.
Keep practicing, go through the article tagged for building content. 🙂