Mentor’s Comments-
- Introduce the answer.
- Identify the different stakeholders in the case above.
- Enlist the arguments you would present to the CEO of the Company to take action in this matter.
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Mentor’s Comments-
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Siddharth,
Good attempt. You have given many diverse points. The points given by you are diverse and relevant. In the first part, do not just mention the stakeholders but also mention what are the stakes involved. Other parts have been decently answered.
Keep writing.
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Debajyoti,
Good attempt. The points given by you are logical and relevant. You have given many diverse points. In the first part, do not just mention the stakeholders but also elaborate what are the stakes involved. Other parts have been decently answered.
Keep writing.
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Muskan,
Good answer. Good that in the first part you have not just mentioned the stakeholders but also elaborated the stakes involved. The points given by you are logical and relevant. You have given many diverse points. Other parts have been nicely answered.
Keep writing.