Mentor’s Comments-
- Introduce by briefly explaining the concept of persuasion.
- Substantiate the functional role of persuasion in attitudinal change and formation with examples.
- Conclude accordingly.
No. 1 UPSC IAS Platform for preparation
Mentor’s Comments-
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Sushant
Decent attempt.
Introduction is good, nice beginning with quote.
Content is fine too, good use of examples but write a few points on how does persuasion help to change attitudes.. Then mention the examples.
For example you can mention things like persuasion establishes credibility, helps in formulation of common goals and their achievement, reduces resistance, uses reciprocity principle( example- banning liquor before elections turns into women votes), reinforces positions by presentation of evidence, talks about scarcity thus inducing change in attitude ( for example- Hurry! Limited offer ads) etc
Concept of pathos, ethos and logos is also good.
Comparison of freedom fighters can be avoided, both can be used as positive examples.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Hello
Decent attempt.
Introduction is fine.
Significance of persuasion is also written.
Nice use of examples.
Further, you can mention examples from history(freedom movement).
Also, you can mention points like persuasion establishes credibility(by adjusting arguments depending on the audience), helps in formulation of common goals and their achievement, uses reciprocity principle( example- banning liquor before elections turns into women votes), reinforces positions by presentation of evidence, talks about scarcity thus inducing change in attitude ( for example- Hurry! Limited offer ads) etc
Other points are good.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
4.5/10