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Begin by defining impartiality.
In the body, write about the importance of impartiality as a core value of civil service achieving equity, avoiding conflict of interest, upholding equality, eliminating bias and welfare for all etc.
Complete the answer by suggesting ways of practising impartiality in public administration.
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Pranav
Good answer.
Introduction is good, short and crisp.
In the body also, points are fine, however, you can mention some more examples- for example, in point no. 3 you can mention how ‘partiality’ towards poor, down-trodden, disabled etc can be used to lift them up(concept of affirmative action).
Importance of impartiality in resolving conflicts(communal, ethnic etc) can be mentioned too- example of N Ravi as an interlocutor in north-east, SC appointing a committee to solve Babri dispute can be used.
Other points are good, conclusion is fine too- you can try to use a quote for better impact.
Keep practicing. 🙂