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- Explain the meaning of the term Emotional Intelligence.
- Discuss why it is an important trait in a highly competitive environment, where achievement is
valued. - Conclude with a way forward.
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Mentor’s Comments-
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Anoop
Nice attempt, your understanding is good. Presentation is also fine.
Principles of EI have also been mentioned, you can add relationship management too.
Further explanation is good, you can give some more examples- how students with higher EI perform better and do not take any adverse steps amidst a highly competitive environment based on merit, rigorous academic curriculum and societal expectations.
Example of civil servants can also be mentioned- role in empathy in performing one’s duty, leadership skills, understanding peer groups point of view etc
Further, you can mention that even in corporate world, companies look to recruit a candidate with higher EI as it ensures flexibility etc
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Alka
Your understanding of the topic is good.
Good introduction along with diagram.
Explanations are also fine, however, you have missed out on giving examples.
You can talk about how students with higher EI perform better and do not take any adverse steps amidst a highly competitive environment based on merit, rigorous academic curriculum and societal expectations. Example of civil servants can also be mentioned- role in empathy in performing one’s duty, leadership skills, understanding peer groups point of view etc
Further, you can mention that even in corporate world, companies look to recruit a candidate with higher EI as it ensures flexibility etc
Conclusion is good, just insert examples and it should be good to go.
Keep practicing. 🙂