Karun

Decent attempt.
Moral attitude is well explained.
In influence of social media, you have focussed more on negatives. Points are good.
But you can mention some positive points- how social media helps in raising awareness against social injustices.
Examples of Me Too movement, Black Lives Matter etc can be mentioned.
Further, space for discussion and debate on long term binaries can be mentioned- liberalism vs conservatism, religion vs atheism etc. Freedom for an individual to make an informed decision.
Overall answer is fine, but more dimensions can be included.
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂