Mentor’s Comments-
- Introduce by defining the term organizational culture.
- Discuss how organizational culture impacts motivation of civil servants and sustains values in administration.
- Conclude appropriately.
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Mentor’s Comments-
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Siddharth,
Good attempt. The demand of the question has been met. Good that you have used examples to substantiate your points. However you can use many more examples. You could have explained organizational culture in more details. The points mentioned by you are relevant. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.