Mentor’s Comments-
- List down the ten essential values needed for an effective public servant with a brief explanation for each.
- Mention some ways and means to prevent non-ethical behaviour such as transparency and accountability, cutting down on discretionary powers, effective laws and regulations, codes of ethics and conduct etc
- Conclude suitably.
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Decent attempt. Introduction is fine.
Qualities mentioned are also okay. Some important ones like honesty, integrity and accountability are missing. Crisis management has been repeated. Other points are fine.
Next part is also decent, presentation can be a bit better.
Points are fine, in 1st point you can add social audits, further you can mention reducing the discretionary powers of civil servants, whistleblower protection, need for code of ethics, more ethical recruitment process etc
Write a concluding statement.
Keep practicing. 🙂