Mentor’s Comments-
- Introduce by briefly defining and discussing about Attitude and Laws.
- Discuss how and why laws may not be able to address certain problems for which attitude change of a person can be a solution. Provide example for each point.
- Then conclude with how change in people’s attitude and laws with time is important for long term solutions.
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Vishwendra
Decent attempt.
Introduction is good.
Nice use of examples in the answer. Broadly, you have been able to convey your thoughts.
You can also use examples of patriarchy in the society (for example, in spite of dowry laws, it still continues to be prevalent; triple talaq etc)
However, also write a brief section on how sometimes laws are necessary to bring about attitudinal change itself for example, mandatory wearing of seat belts etc
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing. 🙂