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1. In the intro, mention the current controversy involving the NCB case involving Aryan Khan.
2. In the body, mention India’s rank at 86th place. The next part mention the public service and the role of probity in governance and the philosophical basis of probity. In the present context, mention the various challenges facing the civil servants and how the probity of the civil servants is relevant in handling these challenges.
3. Conclude by mentioning the significance of probity in the functioning of civil service.
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Siddharth,
Good attempt. You have good command over the topic. Try to elaborate through examples. The points given by you are relevant and meets the demand of the question. Overall a good answer.
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Debajyoti,
Good answer. Try to write 1-2 line introduction before drawing chart or flow diagram. Content-wise the answer is good. Points mentioned are relevant. The demand of the question is met. Substantiate through examples. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.
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Nandhini,
Good answer. You have good knowledge of the topic. However try to include as many examples as possible to support your points. The points mentioned by you are diverse and logical. Overall a good answer.
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Muskan,
Good attempt. Introduction is very good. Good that you have tried to include current context. Good that you have given examples. It is value addition to answer that you have mentioned about the challenges associated as well. The points mentioned by you are relevant and meets the demand of the question. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.