“Mentor’s Comments”
Introduction – write about new education policy
Body – explain how schools can ensure values in students. Relate it with those provisions of New Education Policy that support it.
Conclusion – state the importance of ethical citizens for a country
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Yamini,
First of all I am sorry for delayed evaluation.
Your Introduction is very well articulated.
Your content, expression of language, structure is also good.
However you need to improve the arrangement of your arguments.
Question Asked you to discuss in the context of NEP. So rather then writing Vision of NEP separately you must Inculcate them in your arguments.
For example you can quote in first point that Policy envisions to promote Respect and principle of equality via a education system that contributes directly to transforming India sustainably into an equitable and vibrant knowledge society.
Add examples in your answer and they need to be clear and specific.
You have presented very good argument with a small Improvement on suggested lines you can get good score in Mains.
Keep Practicing 🙂
Note- Since it’s a two month program last date to write answers is July 30th. All the questions will be evaluated latest by August 5th.
After that this program will end as we need to focus on Prelims. So write all the answers before 30th.
Please review it sir
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Shubham,
Your can write much better Introduction. Be mindful of the words you use in your answer. Pandora Box is a negative term which is not suitable with the premises.
Question ask you the write role of school in Inculcating values and ethics in the context of NEP.
So rather then writing separately you need depict role of School and how NEP promotes it. It will make your answer more effective.
Also you need examples in your answer to give more depth to your Arguments.
Rest is fine. Keep practicing 🙂
Note- Since it’s a two month program last date to write answers is July 30th. All the questions will be evaluated latest by August 5th.
After that this program will end as we need to focus on Prelims. So write all the answers before 30th.
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Rajlaxmi,
Your Introduction is well articulated.
You have addressed this question as if it is asked in paper 2. You need to write it for paper 4.
Question ask you the write role of school in Inculcating values and ethics and how NEP promotes it.
Read the Vision of this NEP given as follows it will help you to write an answer which addresses the demand of the question.
This National Education Policy envisions an education system rooted in Indian ethos that contributes directly to transforming India, that is Bharat, sustainably into an equitable and vibrant knowledge society, by providing high-quality education to all, and thereby making India a global knowledge superpower. The Policy envisages that the curriculum and pedagogy of our institutions must develop among the students a deep sense of respect towards the Fundamental Duties and Constitutional values, bonding with one’s country, and a conscious awareness of one’s roles and responsibilities in a changing world. The vision of the Policy is to instill among the learners a deep-rooted pride in being Indian, not only in thought, but also in spirit, intellect, and deeds, as well as to develop knowledge, skills, values, and dispositions that support responsible commitment to human rights, sustainable development and living, and global well-being, thereby reflecting a truly global citizen.
Always be mindful of the paper you are writing for. Keep practicing 🙂
Note- Since it’s a two month program last date to write answers is July 30th. All the questions will be evaluated latest by August 5th.
After that this program will end as we need to focus on Prelims. So write all the answers before 30th.
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Kartikey,
You have Written a very generic answer. Not at all of the standard that you have set by your earlier ethics answer.
Question ask you the write role of school in Inculcating values and ethics in the context of NEP.
So rather then writing separately you need depict role of School and how NEP promotes it. It will make your answer more effective.
Bring out values like Integrity, discipline, resilience, aspiration, determination, tolerance, respect etc. That school as an institution promotes.
Read the Vision of this NEP given as follows it will help you to write an answer which addresses the demand of the question more effectively.
This National Education Policy envisions an education system rooted in Indian ethos that contributes directly to transforming India, that is Bharat, sustainably into an equitable and vibrant knowledge society, by providing high-quality education to all, and thereby making India a global knowledge superpower. The Policy envisages that the curriculum and pedagogy of our institutions must develop among the students a deep sense of respect towards the Fundamental Duties and Constitutional values, bonding with one’s country, and a conscious awareness of one’s roles and responsibilities in a changing world. The vision of the Policy is to instill among the learners a deep-rooted pride in being Indian, not only in thought, but also in spirit, intellect, and deeds, as well as to develop knowledge, skills, values, and dispositions that support responsible commitment to human rights, sustainable development and living, and global well-being, thereby reflecting a truly global citizen.
Keep Practicing 🙂
3.5/10
Note- Since it’s a two month program last date to write answers is July 30th. All the questions will be evaluated latest by August 5th.
After that this program will end as we need to focus on Prelims. So write all the answers before 30th.
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Ankita,
Your Introduction is good. You can avoid line Written unnecessarily about renaming of ministry.
You have started addressing the question in the right direction but you lost the track in the middle then in the end you can back on track.
Question ask you the write role of school in Inculcating values and ethics in the context of NEP.
So rather then writing separately you need depict role of School and how NEP promotes it. It will make your answer more effective.
Question asks you write the role of school in Inculcating values and ethics in the context of NEP.
So rather then writing separately you need depict role of School and how NEP promotes it.
You need Depict value that NEP promotes with each point. Your first 3 points related to NEP do not make it apparent.
Read the Vision of this NEP given as follows it will help you to write an answer which addresses the demand of the question more effectively.
This National Education Policy envisions an education system rooted in Indian ethos that contributes directly to transforming India, that is Bharat, sustainably into an equitable and vibrant knowledge society, by providing high-quality education to all, and thereby making India a global knowledge superpower. The Policy envisages that the curriculum and pedagogy of our institutions must develop among the students a deep sense of respect towards the Fundamental Duties and Constitutional values, bonding with one’s country, and a conscious awareness of one’s roles and responsibilities in a changing world. The vision of the Policy is to instill among the learners a deep-rooted pride in being Indian, not only in thought, but also in spirit, intellect, and deeds, as well as to develop knowledge, skills, values, and dispositions that support responsible commitment to human rights, sustainable development and living, and global well-being, thereby reflecting a truly global citizen.
Keep Practicing 🙂
3.5/10