Mentor’s Comments-
- Briefly define Emotional Intelligence and mention its constituents
- Explain the importance of self-awareness as core of high emotional intelligence.
- Provide appropriate examples to show that lack of self-awareness in terms of behavior and
motivations is making it impossible to develop and understanding of others - Conclude accordingly.
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Karun
Decent attempt. Introduction is good.
Use of flowchart is nice. But self-awareness part needs to be elaborated a bit. Then link it with high EI.
Examples given are nice, but you can mix it up rather than writing all historical examples, requirement of understanding oneself first in civil services for better service delivery can be mentioned, international relations examples can be used too.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂