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You have written decently. Introduction is good. Points in next part are also fine. Some points are missing, for example, you can talk about one of the core ideas of Arya Samaj that is infallibility of the Vedas and its use in reviving the spiritual dynamism of current day Hindu society and inculcating progressive values in order to bring prosperity and well-being for all.
Points related to education, equality and justice are good(role in fighting casteism, communalism can be highlighted).
Next, you could also talk about inspiration that modern day society could take from Arya Samaj in order to curtail consumerism and materialism and follow the path of Dharma.
Point no. 4 is not clear, you can avoid it.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
Introduction is fine, but you can make it a bit concise, no need to write about puranas here, also such a strong stance against idol worship can be avoided.
Teachings mentioned are fine but try to link it with how they can help in solving modern day issues.
You have mentioned some in conclusion but can be done in the points itself as it is the core demand of the question.
For example, in point no. 3 you can mention curtailing the culture of consumerism, materialism etc
In point no. 4 you can mention combating casteism, communalism etc
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Vasudha
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You have written decently. Introduction is good. Points in next part are also fine. Some points are missing, for example, you can talk about one of the core ideas of Arya Samaj that is infallibility of the Vedas and its use in reviving the spiritual dynamism of current day Hindu society and inculcating progressive values in order to bring prosperity and well-being for all.
Points related to education, equality and justice are good(role in fighting casteism, communalism can be highlighted).
Next, you could also talk about inspiration that modern day society could take from Arya Samaj in order to curtail consumerism and materialism and follow the path of Dharma.
Point no. 4 is not clear, you can avoid it.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Akanksha
Introduction is fine, but you can make it a bit concise, no need to write about puranas here, also such a strong stance against idol worship can be avoided.
Teachings mentioned are fine but try to link it with how they can help in solving modern day issues.
You have mentioned some in conclusion but can be done in the points itself as it is the core demand of the question.
For example, in point no. 3 you can mention curtailing the culture of consumerism, materialism etc
In point no. 4 you can mention combating casteism, communalism etc
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂
4.5/10
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