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This is the quote given by Mahatma Gandhi, which underlines the importance of religion in shaping political and moral attitude of people. The answer can be framed in the following manner:
• Elaborate the statement and its assumptions in detail.
• Discuss how religion played an important role in shaping political attitude in India.
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Your attempt is decent but answer has become a bit generic.
How religion shapes political attitude and justification from ‘Indian context’ i is missing.
Intro is fine, mention of temples is okay too but further you can use more recent examples which affect socio-political life such as partition of India on basis of religious lines, existence of political parties adhering to a particular religious ideology etc
Also mention some of the factors for such condition in India- here you can mention ‘Dharma’ concept as one of the points, add points such as divide and rule policy in colonial times, numerical dominance of one religion over the minorities, easier mobilization of people by political parties on basis of religious identities etc.
Conclusion is fine.
Try to address the core demands of the question in a more effective way.
Keep practicing. 🙂
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Abhishek
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Your answer is decent but some key elements are missing.
Introduction is good.
In next part, you have given a brief overview of how has religion shaped political attitude- that is good but also mention ‘why’. Examples given are nice, you can keep them a bit concise and in the next subsection you can mention some factors on why religion shaped political attitude.
Mention points like existence of political parties adhering to particular religious ideology, easier mobilization of people on religious lines, numerical dominance of one religion over minorities, ethical concept of Dharma and how it influences people etc.
Conclusion is good.
Keep practicing.
3.5/10
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Nandhini
Decent attempt. Introduction is good.
You can use more examples of the role of religion in shaping socio-political life specifically in Indian context for e.g. partition of India on religious lines, examples from ancient India can be used.
Mention about existence of political parties, mobilization of voters etc on religious lines is good.
Further, you can talk about the ethical part- concept of ‘dharma’ can be elaborated. Numerical dominance of one religion over minorities can also be sited as one of the factors influencing religious political attitude.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂