Q.4 “Try not to become a man of success but rather try to become a man of value”- Albert Einstein. Bring out what this statement means to you in the present context. (10 Marks)
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Briefly explain what you understand by the quote.
Highlight the relationship between success and values and substantiate it with examples.
Arpita,
Good attempt. The demand of the question has been met. Good that you have used 2-3 examples. It enriches the explanation of the quote. You can give comparative example to show the difference between 2 successful people but one with value and other without value. The explanation that you have given is relevant. Overall a good answer.
Siddharth,
Good answer. You have shown the relevance of the statement in the present context. You have given many diverse points which adds value to the answer. Try to also include examples of some individual to enrich the explanation of the given statement. Overall a good answer.
Anshuman,
Good answer. You have mentioned many diverse points and corelated with the present context. Try to support these arguments with examples. Examples are must in GS-4 paper answers. Quote examples from individual’s life or real life situation to make answer more holistic and specific. Use of example helps in better explanation of the statement given in the question. It brings more clarity. Overall a good answer.
Ashok,
Good attempt. The demand of the question has been met. The points that you have mentioned are relevant. Do quote examples. Examples are must in GS-4 paper. The essence of all the arguments that you have mentioned should be made more clear by quoting examples from an individual’s life or real life scenario. You can quote examples from mythology. Overall a good answer.
Muskan,
Very good answer. Good that you have given examples. The use of typical ethics related terms add value to the answer. Also elaborate a little more about the statement given in the question. Write 2-3 more statements to bring the essence of the quote. Also try to corelate with present context like climate issue, democratic values, diversity in the society. Overall a very good answer.
Nandhini,
Good attempt. The demand of the question is met. The points and arguments that you have given are relevant. The example of India as a leader adds value to the answer. Also mention comparative example to show success with value and success without value. You can quote examples from mythology. Also corelate with the current context of climate change, democratic principles. Overall a good answer.
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Arpita,
Good attempt. The demand of the question has been met. Good that you have used 2-3 examples. It enriches the explanation of the quote. You can give comparative example to show the difference between 2 successful people but one with value and other without value. The explanation that you have given is relevant. Overall a good answer.
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Siddharth,
Good answer. You have shown the relevance of the statement in the present context. You have given many diverse points which adds value to the answer. Try to also include examples of some individual to enrich the explanation of the given statement. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.
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Anshuman,
Good answer. You have mentioned many diverse points and corelated with the present context. Try to support these arguments with examples. Examples are must in GS-4 paper answers. Quote examples from individual’s life or real life situation to make answer more holistic and specific. Use of example helps in better explanation of the statement given in the question. It brings more clarity. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.
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Ashok,
Good attempt. The demand of the question has been met. The points that you have mentioned are relevant. Do quote examples. Examples are must in GS-4 paper. The essence of all the arguments that you have mentioned should be made more clear by quoting examples from an individual’s life or real life scenario. You can quote examples from mythology. Overall a good answer.
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Muskan,
Very good answer. Good that you have given examples. The use of typical ethics related terms add value to the answer. Also elaborate a little more about the statement given in the question. Write 2-3 more statements to bring the essence of the quote. Also try to corelate with present context like climate issue, democratic values, diversity in the society. Overall a very good answer.
Keep writing.
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Nandhini,
Good attempt. The demand of the question is met. The points and arguments that you have given are relevant. The example of India as a leader adds value to the answer. Also mention comparative example to show success with value and success without value. You can quote examples from mythology. Also corelate with the current context of climate change, democratic principles. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.