Mentor’s Comments-
- State the factors that are affecting currently held attitude towards homosexuality in India.
- Mention the factors that result in changing attitude towards homosexuality and what this change is all about.
- End with a way forward.
No. 1 UPSC IAS Platform for preparation
Mentor’s Comments-
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Muskan
Introduction is fine.
In changing attitudes, mention about constitutional and human rights-driven approach, increasing literacy and some other factors which influence attitude. You have mentioned some good points too.
In next part, mention SC judgements decriminalizing homosexuality, social acceptance etc
Other points are good.
Conclusion is fine.
Keep practicing. 🙂