Mentor’s Comments-
- In the introduction, define foundational values in civil services and its importance in general.
- In the body, mention reasons for their being foundational in nature.
- Elaborate any two values which according to you are of paramount importance with examples.
- Conclude appropriately.
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Siddharth
Good attempt. Introduction is fine.
Good use of diagrams and examples.
Explanation is also good.
Keep writing. 🙂
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Hello
Intro is good, after that mention some of the foundational values- you can use a small diagram.
Why they are called foundational part is fine, keep it concise.
In the next part about the two values, mention examples in both cases.
Also try to link both values to current affairs especially their role in pandemic and its management.
A concluding statement would also be good.
Keep writing. 🙂
3.5/10
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Nandhini
Good attempt, intro is good.
Content is well presented,
Good use of diagrams and examples also.
Mention the importance of these values in serving the society especially vulnerable sections.
You can link with current affairs by mentioning role of these values in pandemic times.
Overall nice answer, keep writing. 🙂
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Muskan
Content is fine but present it better. You can give separate subheading to explain why these values are called foundational.
Explanation about integrity and empathy is fine.
Use some examples in both cases.
In empathy, you can also mention about its role in delivering services to the vulnerable and weaker section, can link it with current affairs by mentioning usefulness of these values in the pandemic.
Keep writing. 🙂