“Mentor’s Comments”
Introduction- define public service values
Body –
Name 3 public service values which are important in your opinion.
Explain their importance.
Add examples
Conclusion – write on general importance of public service values for civil servants
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Shubhashree,
Overall you have Written a fine Answer. However following improvements can be done-
1. Write more refined definition, except integrity your definitions are not upto the mark.
2. In examples you should mention field of work of the officer so highlight their contribution.
3. In the end you should a bit more about the Importance of these values.
Rest is Written Good. Keep Practicing 🙂
4.5/10
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Shivanshu,
Your Introduction is Good. Overall all answer is Written well. There is only two things that I want two point how.
First, further improvement needs to be done in your presentation. Arrangment of lines, headings with proper spacing need to be done some to make your answer more presentable.
Second, give examples for each Value. Without example arguments doesn’t seem very convincing.
Rest is written well. all the best and KEEP PRACTICING 🙂
4.5/10
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Ankita,
UPSC is asking this type of question Continuously so you must prepare such values thoroughly with decent examples.
With your answer it seems you dont have the right knowledge about these values.
Read more about the each values. Give crisp definition of public service values than of each values then give examples in Support of the Arguement.
Then write more effective Argument under each values so to bring their utilities for civil services more clearly.
Ankita You have shown very good Improvement but I don’t expect you to write such poor answer especially at this stage. Don’t repeat mistakes.
Read more about each values.
All the very Best. Keep Practicing 🙂
2.5/10
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Kartikey,
Your Introduction is well Written. Conclusion is fine which can be Written Better.
There is nothing wrong in this Answer as such. However you need to give better examples. Quote some public servants.
One more important thing is that rather then writing Probity as value you should choose another Value. Probity as such is not a value rather it’s the quality/commitment towards having strong moral principles. So choose another value.
Rest is Written fine. Keep Practicing 🙂
3.5/10