Mentor’s Comments-
- Briefly explain the meaning of corruption.
- Discuss how not all corruptions are equally damaging to the economy.
- Present counter arguments by highlighting the ill-effects of corruption.
- Conclude accordingly.
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Mentor’s Comments-
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Bh Rpalli,
Good answer. Good example that you have mentioned. It is relevant. You can show comparative analysis as to when more good is done than harm by corruption, then based on cost-benefit analysis it is not that harmful. However it should be used rarely and not be made norms. You have used good arguments. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.
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Siddharth,
Good answer. Quote some specific examples to show that corruption is not always equally harmful. You can show comparative analysis that if more good is done than harm by corruption, then it is not that harmful. However it should be used rarely and not be made norms. You have used good arguments. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.
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Arpita,
Good answer. You have used good mix of arguments and examples which complement each other and makes the answer more complete. Structure and presentation is also good. The arguments and examples used are relevant. Overall a very good answer.
Keep practicing.
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Ashok,
Good answer. The demand of the question is met. The arguments given by you is very apt and relevant. However, do mention examples. Examples are must to support you arguments. Quote some example to show how some kind of corruption is not that bad. Conclusion is good. Structure and presentation is also nice. Overall a decent answer.
Keep writing.
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Nandhini,
Good answer. The arguments presented by you is relevant. However, support the arguments with examples. Quoting example is a must in such question. Show through examples in which scenario corruption is not that harmful. Conclusion is very good. Overall a decent answer.
Keep writing.