Mentor’s Comments-
- Introduce by writing the context and the facts of the case study.
- Listing the various options available, evaluate merits and demerits of each option.
- Apart from these options, provide a decisive course of action that can be taken with proper reasons.
- Conclude accordingly.
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Pranav
Introduction is fine, stakeholders are also mentioned.
Options mentioned by you are good, in first point demerits mention comprising honesty,integrity and other ethical values.
Other options could be added such as – informing the media- merits- help creating public pressure, gain public trust etc; demerits- sensationalisation of the issue, might backfire on premature recourse to media etc
Investigation of the issue and following due procedure can also be mentioned as an option, as it is not necessary that higher authority will be cooperative. You can mention this option as the course of action in part b. As it is the primary duty of the official to first do an investigation and ascertain all facts, then communicate the senior about the illegality on the basis of sound evidence. Media can be involved as an ally only as a measure of last resort.
In long term measures, you can talk about drone-based monitoring of forests, upgrading check points, involving locals for correct information etc
Keep practicing, your format of the answer is good, just some things are missing here and there. 🙂