Mentor’s Comments-
- Provide a brief introduction of the case-study.
- Discuss whether you have any ethical duty in the scenario with justification.
- Mention the steps to be taken by you in the scenario, with reasons.
- Conclude appropriately.
No. 1 UPSC IAS Platform for preparation
Mentor’s Comments-
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Muskan,
Good attempt.
You have tried well to cover various dimensions.
You have addressed all the parts of the question.
Keep introduction a bit short.
Do not use extreme and harsh words like ‘I would remove all officials involved in heinous crime’. Frame moderate sentences like I would take action against them, I would set up enquiry committee. Removing officials is extreme statements. It may not be within your jurisdiction to remove an official. Avoid such statements.
Also discuss the ethical issue involved with the rights of unborn child.
You can also take help of ASHA workers.
Focus should be on behaviour change first then coercive methods.
Keep practising.