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1. In the intro, mention the current coal crisis and the reasons for it in brief.
2. In the body, mention the importance of coal in the country’s economic development as our power needs are heavily dependent on thermal power and its implications for climate change. In the next part, give the distribution of coal.
3. Conclude by mentioning the need for balancing the development needs of the economies of the world at various stages and avoiding the dangers of climate change.
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Sweta,
Good attempt. The demand of the question is not met. Read the question carefully. Show how coal is a necessary evil. You can show the harmful impacts of coal and is necessary because harnessing alternate sources of energy is challenging. Other parts are decently answered.
Keep writing.
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Debajyoti,
Decent attempt. Introduction is good that you have talked about the present context. But the demand of the question is not met. Read the question carefully. You have focused on coal shortage but the question demands harmful effects of coal and why it is necessary in spite of being harmful. Show the distribution of coal around world through map.
Keep writing.
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Siddharth,
Good attempt. The demand of the question is met. All the parts of the question has been answered. The points given are relevant. Good that you have drawn map. Overall a holistic answer.
Keep writing.
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Nandhini,
Good answer. The points given are relevant and as per demand of the question. Try to show the distribution of coal around the world through map. Map adds value in such questions. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.
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Muskan,
Good answer. Introduction is very good. Good that you have mentioned the current context. Good that you have drawn map to show distribution of coal around the world. Enclose the map in a box for better presentation. The demand of the question is met. All the major points are covered and are relevant. Overall a good answer.
Keep writing.