Mentor’s Comments-
- Briefly define the terms empathy and compassion in the introduction.
- Highlight the differences between the two terms clearly.
- Discuss the role of compassion in administration bringing out the humane character of administration towards weaker sections of the society.
- Conclude appropriately.
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Arpita.
Very good attempt. You have good understanding of the topic. Structure and flow is also very good.
Try to present the difference in a tabular form for better presentation. Try to use an example or a case study to further elaborate and support your points. GS 4 particularly demands lots of use of examples and therefore try to include examples along with the theory part.
Overall a very good answer.
Keep practicing.
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Siddharth,
Nice attempt. You have good command over the topic. Structure and flow is also very good.
Good that you have presented the difference in a tabular form. Try to use an example or a case study to further elaborate and support your points. GS 4 particularly demands lots of use of examples and therefore try to include examples along with the theory part.
Overall a very good answer.
Keep practicing.