Mentor’s comment:
- https://indianexpress.com/article/opinion/editorials/modi-cabinet-meeting-decision-coal-block-allocation-6208796/
- https://www.thehindu.com/opinion/editorial/mining-deep/article30526562.ece
- In the intro, briefly explain the importance of coal for other sectors and industries and to the country as a whole.
- In the main body, describe the regulations that were in place and their effects on the sector- like less realisation of revenue, how India had to import coal and spend foreign exchange to buy it. On the same note, explain the pros of the move. In cons explain the effect move could have on Coal India Limited and importance of Coal India Limited for the country, or the presence of foreign companies in the sector.
- In conclusion, write the positive effects the sector holds and welcome it.
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We all know that the Government should make sure that the above shortcomings should be overcome. But how! That is the whole purpose of way forward. Avoid these general statements in your answer. UPSC wants some concrete inputs from your end.
The rest of the answer is decent.
The main body is fine.
But before discussing the pros and cons, briefly discuss the order in a little bit more details.
The depth in the main content is good.
Points are well placed.
The language is short and crisp.
To make your answer look better, in some part of your answer can have flowcharts.
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Very good answer.
All the necessary parts have been answered.
The way forward/conclusion is fine.
The content has no problem anywhere.
The structure is perfect.
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The answer is near perfect in terms of the depth of the content.
But the balance is little off. Reason being, you did not discuss the issues or challenges or cons of the order in the 2nd part of the answer.
The rest of the answer is fantastic in terms of the content.
The presentation can be made a little better by underlining imp points and keeping your subheadings separate.
Very good way forward.
The conclusion is also fine.
AVoid large paragraphs.
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Before discussing the pros and cons, briefly discuss the order in a little bit more details. Give some background as in why this move was needed. Keep this discussion short and brief.
Decent main body discussion.
Good way forwards but they are over-discussed.
Keep your presentation clean.
Avoid cutting.
Underline imp points
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Very good answer.
Work on your presentation skills to score better marks.
The content is superb.
The dimensions covered in both parts are very good.
Underline important points.
Good way forward.
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No issues in the answer.
Everything is perfectly fine.
Points are well explored and crisply explained.
Coverage has the necessary depth and width.
Good ending.
Good that you discussed the background of the coal sector reforms.
Perfect use of the flowchart.
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The balance is little off. Reason being, you did not discuss the issues or challenges or cons of the order in the 2nd part of the answer.
No need to discuss 2015 Act in such details.
The structure needs to be better.
After intro, just discuss the 2015 issue and the background in minimal terms.
Then discuss the present Act and briefly discuss its features.
Then discuss its pros. It will your 1st part of the main body.
Then discuss the cons of the move. This will be the 2nd part of the main body.
Then discuss the way forward if time and space permit or simply conclude the answer by suggesting some steps to make things better.
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You failed to discuss the cons of the move which affects your balance in the main body of the answer.
The rest of the answer is ear perfect in terms of presentation and content.
The overall discussion is fine.
The language is short and crisp.
The demand of the answer is nicely met.