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- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/the-financial- capacity-of-states-is-being- weakened/article33024573.ece - In the intro, mention how the Constitution has provided for the financial independence of the State and the Centre.
- In the body, mention the various reason for the weakening of the financial health of the State like reduced devolution to the State, roll out of the GST has taken away the autonomy of the States and use of cess and surcharge by the Central government etc. In the measures, suggest the sharing of more resources with the states, increasing the borrowing limits of the States, avoiding dependence on the cess and surcharges for raising revenue by the Central government.
- Conclude by mention the need for stronger States with stronger financial capabilities.
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Hi Somasis
Good introduction.
After the introduction, yo have given the heading but it is not looking as a heading, You can leave some space after the introduction then give the heading.
Reasons and measures are discussed in a decent manner.
Work on handwriting, avoid scribbling.
Structure of the answer is really good.
Good conclusion.
You have good hold over content , keep enriching it.
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Hi Divya
Also mention 7th schedule in the introduction.
Reasons are discussed in a good manner but try to write under subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Refrain from monotony, underline keywords.
There is only one centre not centres in India, avoid these type of mistakes.
Good conclusion.
Overall a good attempt.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Vinay
Mention 7th schedule in the introduction.
In the reasons, you have written about cess and surcharges in two points, avoid repeating.
Suggestions are good.
Write under subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Good conclusion.
Underline important stuff.
Keep working hard !