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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ climate-change-cop-un- convention-paris-climate- agreement-7216163/ - In the intro, mention the nationally determined contributions.
- In the body, mention the factors that form the basis of India’s stance- delinking with China, finance issues, resisting the pressure to commit to the decision that could limit its development prospects etc.
- Conclude by mentioning that India needs to follow the path on climate action keeping in mind its development prospects.
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Hi Surya
Good intro.
You have good hold over content but your answer looks like an article from the newspaper.
Work on it.
Leave spaces between the paragraphs and write in points instead of paragraphs.
Give headings and subheadings.
Avoid scribbling while writing.
Keep working hard.