Mentors Comment:
State the challenges that the bureaucracy in India faces.
Mention the consequences if these challenges remain unaddressed.
Discuss the reforms that are required to address the challenges.
Answer
The civil services are a crucial pillar of the Indian state, having been responsible for administering the country before it was even independent. The Union Public Service Commission (UPSC) was established in 1926, but was re-envisioned for independent India by Sardar Vallabhai Patel. It was meant to produce an elite cadre of officers who would be politically neutral. Recently, there has been talk of reforming the administrative services and especially, the process of recruitment as well as the reforms for improving the bureaucracy.
Challenges faced by the bureaucracy and their consequences include:
Shortfall in personnel: Overall shortage of personnel, especially in mid-level and higher level services as highlighted by the Baswan Committee Report (2016) leads to delay in service, burden on existing staff, etc.
Undue political interference: This often results in frequent transfers of those who challenge the political executive, de-motivating others from taking a stand, thus undermining the public’s faith in bureaucracy.
Lack of specialized skills among bureaucrats: In decisions regarding promotion and staffing, general competency is valued. However, lack of specialised skills can make them redundant in a fast changing world.
Detachment from the public: This leads to a gap in policy formulation and implementation, especially regarding welfare activities, if bureaucrats are unaware of the ground reality.
Increased corruption: High level of corruption in bureaucracy is associated with low levels of investment and growth.
Lack of transparency and accountability: This can result in discretionary decisions by officers for their personal benefits.
Resistance to change: Bureaucracy has often been criticized for its resistance to change towards adopting technology and decentralization of governance.
Reforms required to address the challenges:
Implementing a fixed tenure for bureaucrats.
Proper compensation and privileges to curb corruption.
Further, there should be strict vigilant mechanisms and proper implementation of anti-corruption laws.
Digitization in the administrative process and communication of bureaucratic decisions to the public thereby ensuring proper channelization of resources.
Lateral entry of experienced officers.
Strengthening accountability mechanisms by intensive reviews at mid-career stage and comprehensive evaluation mechanisms to rank officers on their functional skills, domain expertise, behavioural competence and integrity.
Officers should be assigned to different departments early in their careers to develop specific domain expertise.
They should also go on regular field visits in order to assess ground reality.
Hindrances to bureaucratic functioning should be adequately addressed so that bureaucracy remains a steel frame that holds the country together.
These steps will bring domain-knowledge to the fore in job profiles, dedication, commitment and also establish a sense of camaraderie. This could prove to be beneficial for the bureaucracy as the present set-up breeds a false sense of pride among a few that results in internecine squabbles in which the sycophants and freebooters flourish at the cost of merit even in the same service. After all, bureaucratic virtues cannot be whisked away and without bureaucracy, an organisation will collapse.
Ans
Hi Prakhar
very good answer
Your answer has all the necessary components.
The structure of the answer is adequate and the way you broke the discussions into pieces are excellent.
Good attempt in terms of content, explanation, presentation, structure etc.
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Hye Project Osiris
After intro do mention, briefly, the importance of bureaucracy.
Satisfactory discussion in the main body.
Your coverage is good.
But work on your presentation skills.
Include a short conclusion towards the end.
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Hi Mud Borne
there is no conclusion in the answer.
Mention the importance of bureaucracy in the intro and then link the issue of challenges in it. That will be a fine intro. Do not start the discussion right away.
The first is decent.
Way forward points are weak and need more depth.
Read the model answer in this regard.
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Hi Mohsin
Dont take names in the answer if there is any controversy. Rather mention the person with his/her post that he/she served.
The points in the main body are exhaustive and well covered.
But work on their presentation. You have mentioned points and points and points without explaining a bit about them.
If you just want to give points without explaining them then do use flowchart. that will enhance your presentation as well.
Good way forwards. They are informative and well explained.
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Hi Murari
You need to have more points in such an important topic.
To put more points in less space you can use flowchart but you need to have depth in your answer.
Pints are decent but the lack of depth means that they lack edge.
This I am talking about all the parts of the answer.
Read the model answer.
You can remove the 1st para of your answer and use the 2nd para as your intro. That will give you extra space and better structure as well.
Please make a habit of writing conclusion. Do not end the answer abruptly.
Your language is good.
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Hi Sourav
The question has given you two separate sub headings under which you need to discuss the 1st part: 1. diminishing human capital and 2. political interference.
That is why read the questions carefully and try to craft the answer accordingly.
Most of the times the questions give us important directions.
Your points are OK but they are too general and lack explanation.
Read the model answer in that regard.
Avoid over use of flow charts.
The way forwards are not to the marks. they are better if the question is about corruption in the bureaucracy. You have to give points regarding the internal as well as external reforms needed for bureaucracy.
Read the model answer.
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Hi Pranab
Mention the importance of bureaucracy in the intro and then link the issue of challenges in it. That will be a fine intro. Do not start the discussion right away.
The answer is very superficial and points are general and lack depth.
The question has given you two separate sub headings under which you need to discuss the 1st part: 1. diminishing human capital and 2. political interference.
It is very lengthy topic and hence you should have problems mentioning all those points and way forwards.
Read the model answer.
You have very good handwriting and good language hence use that to your advantage.
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Hi Avani
Very good answer.
Your answer has all the necessary segments and it never lacked explanation.
the use of flowchart is judicious and very good.
Way forwards are satisfactory.
Do mention the ARC 2 report in your way forwards.