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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ agriculture-sector-farm- income-modi-govt-farm-laws- farmers-protests-7228496/ - In the intro, mention that agriculture engages 42 per cent of the country’s workforce.
- In the body, mention the need for a diversified approach to growth in agriculture. Next, mention the factors to focus on such as access to infrastructure, diversification of high-value agricultural products, increasing the efficiency of value chain and policy reforms etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to follow this path to achieve the growth in the sector.
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@Parth Sir, kindly review.
Hi Komal
Starting an answer with quote is really appreciable.
Good intro.
Try to substantiate the challenges in 1-2 lines each, you can summarise the way forward for a balanced answer.
You can also mention that the Rashtriya Krishi Vikas Yojana (RKVY) incentivised the states, which increased their expenditure on agriculture. The Centre’s assistance for such states should be higher.
Good conclusion.
Thumbs up for the content,use subheadings.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Divya
Good intro.
You have explained the need of diversification in agriculture in a decent manner, write few challenges also.
Suggested strategy is good but try to substantiate in 1-2 lines each.
You can also mention that focused research on crops grown in low-productivity states can deliver better seeds, which can withstand the challenge of higher temperature due to climate change.
Use subheadings and avoid bullet points.
Summarise your conclusion.