Mentor’s comment-

• In the introduction briefly explain the recent incident to highlight the context of the question.
• In the body discuss what the major factors that foster sexual violence against women in the country are; explain the factors with special emphasis on the cultural aspects of the Indian society.
  Highlight in what way conversations on sexual violence need to acknowledge the root of the problem. Explain how there is a “locker room” within in each individual, family and the society at
  large. Suggest solutions to address such issues.
• Conclude by suggesting solutions to address the key problems associated with violence against women at the societal level.