Mentor’s comment-
- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/india- lockdown-coronavirus-online- classes-e-learning-virtual- schools-6463946/ - https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/coronavirus- pandemic-online-education- technology-6345621/ - https://www.thehindu.com/
education/traditional-vs- virtual/article31602383.ece - In the intro, you can mention how disruption due to pandemic has forced us to look for alternative and online learning could be one such alternative.
- In the body, first, mention the benefits of online mode-less investment on infrastructure,low cost, access to learning mechanism across the world, a large number of students could be covered etc. In the challenges, mention the issue of connectivity, affordability,inequality etc.
- You can conclude by mentioning the online learning can complement classroom learning but cannot replace it completely.
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Hi Dakshina
Lackluster introduction,it should be catchy.
Good use of flow chart.
Use proper headings and subheadings like why there is a need of online learning, what are the issues and challenges etc.
Structure of answer is not good.
Also explain briefly how online education cannot be a substitute of traditional learning.
good conlclusion.
Work hard on content.
Keep writing.
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Hi Chester
There is an need to rephrase your introduction.
First mention the benefits of online mode.
You have written the challenges but not measures.
Write some way forward.
Also explain briefly how online education cannot be a substitute of traditional learning.
Work on content.
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Underline keywords .
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have adhere to the demand of the question,keep it up.
Try to cover more aspects,like also explain briefly how online education cannot be a substitute of traditional learning.
Avoid scribbling,write neat and legible
Well structured answer.
Content is also diversified.
Good attempt,keep it up.
Keep writing!
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Grammatical errors,rephrase your introduction.
Before writing the challenges,briefly explain some benefits of online learning .
Adhere to the proper structure of the answer.
You have mentioned the opportunities but also mention why it cannot be a alternative to traditional mode of learning.
Good conclusion.
Overall good attempt.
Work on basic grammar and presentation.
Keep writing!
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction.
Well structured answer
Content is well diversified
You have adhere to the demand of the question.
A decent attempt.
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