Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.thehindu.com/
opinion/lead/turning-the- spotlight-on-americas- election-custodian/ article33053738.ece - In the intro, mention the primary function of the ECI.
- In the body, compare the mandates in which the narrow mandate of the U.S. Federal Commission which is related only to the financial matters. Next mention the wide powers conferred on the ECI in India. This wider power has ensured the smooth power transfers in India and election results are accepted without casting doubt on it.
- Conclude by mentioning the need for adoption of some changes like widening ways of voting like the adoption of postal ballots.
Please review
Payment id: #0000334692
Hi Vinay
Good introduction.
Do the comparison under different subheadings like –
RECOGNITION : For a start, the Federal Election Commission has a much narrower mandate than its Indian equivalent.
ESTABLISHMENT : Moreover, the Federal Election Commission was established comparatively recently — it ‘opened its doors’ in 1975, with the special mandate to regulate campaign finance issues.
Write the wider powers of the ECI under a different heading.
Work on presentation.
Good conclusion.
Content wise good attempt.
Try to write all the four GS answers .
Keep writing !
Thanks for your valuable remarks sir. I will improve and try to write all four gs answers