Mentor’s comment-
- https://www.thehindu.com/opinion/lead/the-perils-of-deregulated-imperfect-agrimarkets/article33216046.ece
- In the intro, mention the objective of the Act.
- In the body, discuss the various challenges faced by the farmers- distance of the Mandi, mandi taxes, transaction costs, lack of facilities in the mandis. In the shortcoming in the Act mention the need for increasing the number of mandis for which there is no provision in the Act, experience from the states which have allowed the private markets, in the steps to be taken mention increasing the number of mandis, increasing the investment in mandis, internal reform in mandis like easing the entry of new players, ending the collusion between the traders, introduction of unified national licences etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to implement these suggestions.
tiwarisamiksha6@gmail.com
Hi Samiksha
Good introduction.
You have explained the issues in a decent manner.
Work on space management, summarise the issues, then substantiate the bullet points of solutions in 1-2 lines each.
Good conclusion.
Structure uis decent.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
krushnapatilpk@gmail.com
Hi Krushna
Work on introductory remarks, briefly explain the Act.
Challenges are discussed in a decent manner.
Content is good but need to work on presentation.
Underline keywords .
Avoid gramamtical erros and work on space management.
Work hard, you will improve.
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Name: Prashant
Email: prashant.kumar@alumni.iitd.ac.in
Hi Prashant
Good introduction, write full form first time.
Use of flow chart in explaining the Act is appreciable.
Shortcomings and suggested strategy is decent and according to the demand of the question.
Good structure.
Overall a decent attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers, keep writing, you will succeed.
divyaloyola13@gmail.com
Hi Divya
Good introduction.
Try to use subheadings to present your answer in a decent manner.
Content wise good attempt.
Good conclusion.
Good structure.
A decent attempt.
Keep working hard.