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- https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/industrial-growth- the-right-policy-mix-for- success/2136735/ - In the intro, mention the connection between policies and competitive advantage enjoyed by a country.
- In the body suggest various areas for reforms like- development of industrial parks, preventing REER from appreciating, changes in the regime for SEZ, reducing duties to zero to increase value addition etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to implement these steps to achieve industrial development of a country.
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Hi Pooja
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Your answer looks monotonus, avoid writing in long paragraphs, write in points or a mix of points and small paragraphs.
Give proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Leave proper space between the paragraphs.
In the challenges, you can write that campaigns such as Make in India and Start up India have helped to enhance the business ecosystem in the country. However, electricity shortages and high prices, credit constraints, high unit labour costs due to labour regulations, political interference and other regulatory burdens continue to remain challenges for firm growth of the industrial sector in India.
Work on content, read comprehensively to enrich it.
Avoid grammatical mistakes.
Underline keywords.
Try to write all the four answers.
Do not get demotivated by the marks, keep writing, you will improve.
Thank you
I have written the answer again by the guidelines of your valuable feedback sir, if time permits please do review it.
Hi Pooja
Your answer is well started.
You have discussed the need for the industrial policy in a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt this time.
Keep writing on a regular basis.
Thank you so much sir