Mentor’s comment-
- In the introdution, briefly define the concept of Indian Secularism. Explain in brief how the CAA, NRC have led to protests across the country and North-East states in particular.
- In the body, explain about Indian Secularism in detail and its significance. Provide measures to safeguard the secular fabric in India.
- Conclude with way forward.
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Hi Vaishnavi
First thing, you are writing only 3-4 words in a line, work on it as space will be limited in the mains answer sheet.
Introduction shoulld be of one single paragraph, not three small pragraphs.
You have deviated from the demand of the question.
The question is not only about secularism, you also have to write the challenges posed by the recent CAA and NRC to secularism in India.
Work on content and try to catch the keywords from the question.
Work hard, you will succeed.
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Hi Arun
Lackluster introduction, explain in brief how the CAA, NRC have led to
protests across the country and North-East states in particular.
Follow a proper structure to fetch better marks, first write about Indian secularism then write the challenges posed by the recent CAA and NRC to secularism in India.
In the measures, mention separation of religion from politics is the need of the hour. It is of such urgency that no time should be wasted in bringing this about.
Avoid spelling mistakes.
Keep writing.
thanks for the review.
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Name: Prashant
Email: prashant.kumar@alumni.iitd.ac.in
Hi Prashant
Answer is well started.
You have discussed secularism in a decent manner.
Before writing the way forward, briefly write the challenges posed by the recent CAA and NRC to secularism in India. Then write the measures.
Good concluding remarks.
Avoid using short forms.
Keep writing.
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Hi Krushna
Answer is well started.
You have discussed secularism in a decent manner.
Before writing the way forward, briefly write the challenges posed by the recent CAA and NRC to secularism in India. Then write the measures.
Conclusion should be of one small paragraph.
Underline keywords.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Divya
Good introduction.
You have met the demand of the question in a decent manner.
You have covered various dimensions of the topic, appreciable.
Good conclusion.
Leave some space between the parageaphs.
A decent attempt.
Keep working hard.