Mentor’s comment-
- Write a few introductory lines about India’s MMR, intrauterine growth restriction and poor birth outcome for gestational age and low birth weight (LBW) remain a grave concern for the women of
India. - In the body discuss in points the impacts of the early marriage on women. Now discuss How education of women leads to calculated choices and in turn helps in breaking the cycle of poverty, ill health, as well as the inter-generational cycle of malnutrition. Provide measures that is needed to strive for empowerment of women.
- Based on your discussion, form a fair and a balanced conclusion on the given issue.
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Hi Divya
Good introduction.
Demand of the question is decently met.
Covering various dimension is appreciable.
Good structure.
A decent attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers, keep writing, you will succeed.
Please review
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Hi Shivali
Good introduction.
Content wise good attempt.
Need to work on presentation, use proper headings and subheadings to present your answer in a better structured manner.
Write some of the measures to improve the condition of women.
Good conclusion.
Keep working hard.
please review
Hi Jithin
Good introduction.
Avoid writing in long paragraphs, write in points or a mix of points and small paragraphs while given proper headings and subheadings.
Content is there but need to work on presentation.
Summarise your concluding remarks.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing, you will succeed.