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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/south- china-sea-dispute-asean- countries-relations-vijay- gokhale-6460680/ - In the intro, briefly describe issues of South China Sea dispute.
- In the body, you have to elaborate the basis on which India should be considered as the stakeholder in the region. Such basis could include the fact that region doesn’t belong to China, the passage has been unimpeded for centuries, India’s historical use of the passage, India’s freedom of navigation etc. And in the second part, you have to stress on the importance of India’s engagement with ASEAN in this regard-direct involvement as well as the trade partnerships like RCEP should be mentioned.
- Conclude the importance of peaceful South China Sea for the world and the Indo-Pacific specifically.
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Dakshina introduction needs to be rephrased, work on basic grammar.
your answer is not well structured,proper conclusion is also missing
you need to improve your content and work on handwriting,write neat and legible
avoid using short forms like &.
instead of writing subheading ‘India’s backyard’ use way forward for India.
It is appreciating that you are making diagrams but try to be little more specific in your diagram.
keep writing.
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Hi Chester
good introduction.
You have attempted the question in a decent way.
Well structured answer.
Also explain the importance of ASEAN and RCEP in this dispute.
Good points but try to diversify your content to fetch extra marks.
Mention the importance of peaceful South china sea.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep it up.
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sunny scan properly,your answer in not legible.
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Lackluster introduction,briefly mention the issues of south china sea in it.
Good use of diagram.
In the body of the answer,you have mentioned the issues only ,also explain the importance of ASEAN and RCEP.
Need to enrich your content.
Work on handwriting.
In conclusion,write the importance of peaceful south china sea.
Work hard,you will improve.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction
Your diagram is also good.
In the first part if body,explain the disputes then write India’s stand.
Lackluster conclusion.
Read mentor’s comment before writing the answer,it will help you.
Keep writing.
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Hi Parakh
Good introduction
But you have not explain the issues of south china sea in the body of the answer.
Try to cover more verticals in your answer to get good marks.
Also mention the importance of RCEP in this context.
Lackluster conclusion,write about the importance if peaceful south china sea.
Improve handwriting.
Work hard,you will improve.