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- https://indianexpress.com/
article/opinion/columns/ governments-must-remove- obstacles-of-poorly-designed- planning-systems-fragmented- regulatory-mechanisms-lack-of- investment-7208927/ - In the intro, mention India’s targets under the Paris Agreement.
- In the body mention legacy issues such as poor designs, fragmented regulatory framework and lack of investment. In the suggestion mention robust design framework, reforms in the regulatory framework, increasing investment in the creation of infrastructure.
- Conclude by mentioning the need to work on the legacy issues to get on the path to decarbonisation.
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Hi Komal
Thumbs up for the introduction.
You have good hold over content, keep enriching it.
Content wise good attempt.
Underline keywords and adhere to word limit.
Try to summarise your answer.
Decent structure.
Keep writing.
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Hi Surya
Good intro.
Issues are discussed in a decent manner.
In the measures, mention that poorly designed planning systems, inadequate regulatory frameworks, and a lack of investment are all challenges that policymakers must tackle.
You can also mention use of electric vehicles.
Keep writing.
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