Mentor’s comment-
- In the introduction, you can mention the urgency of vaccine or medicine for Covid-19.
- In the body, you can highlight the various advantages of pooling of the patients. First and foremost would be the sharing of knowledge could accelerate the search for a cure. The could be the cost. You can also highlight the issue of vaccine nationalism among some countries and its impact.
- Conclude by stressing the importance of such move to highlight the equality of life of all.
Please review.
lackluster introduction
the content is general,you did not mention the issue of vaccine nationalism
avoid using abbreviations in your answer
answer is well structured but need to work on diversifying the content
way forward is missing
do not get demotivated by marks,keep writing,you will improve
Do we need to give way forward in each question?
@Parth Verma Please clarify.
Deepika you can give way forward if possible as it adds dimensions to your answer or suggest some steps to be taken in the conclusion.
Please review the answer.
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Hi Dakshina
Good introduction
Good use of flow chart.
Use headings and subheadings like-Patent Pooling: A boon amidst COVID-19 Pandemic,Role of patent pooling,its advantages ,possibilities of conflicts etc.
Need to work upon content,add points like advantage of patent pooling is that generic drug manufacturing companies can combine different medications into single/fixed doses to create better medicines.
Read comprehensively to enrich and diversify your content.
Good conclusion.
Keep writing,you will improve!
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Hi
Good introduction.
Vaccine nationalization is a good point,thumbs up !
Content is diversified and well placed.
Well structured answer with proper subheadings.
Try to write in straight lines and avoid scribbling.
Good conclusion.
A decent attempt,keep it up!
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Hi Parakh
Need to rephrase your introduction.
You have discussed the need of patent pooling in a decent manner.
Good diagram,thumbs up!
Also mention some way forward or give some suggestions.
Conclusion is good.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Do not use short forms in the answer.
Overall a decent attempt.
Keep it up !