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- The introduction must highlight the circumstances that led to the introduction of Ryotwari which was supposed to be better than the Zamindari system.
- The body should clearly highlight how the Ryotwari Settlement seemed fair and practical on paper but the devil was in its implementation. All the drawbacks of the settlement must be clearly stated with supporting data. The impact it caused
upon peasants in areas it was introduced must also written. The flaw in the logic and its implementation must be brought out. The Ryotwari vis-a-vis zamindari must also be explored. For representation purpose, draw maps highlighting regions where zamindari and Ryotwari was introduced in India. - The conclusion must bring out the steps taken by the government to improve the conditions of the Ryotwari areas.
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Hi Geetanjali
Try to finish your answer in maximum two pages, adhere to word limit.
Good introduction.
You have met the demand of the question in a decent manner.
Use of map diagram is appreciable.
Good conclusion.
Content wise good attempt.
Work on presentation, underline keywords.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Keep working hard.
Pls review
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Hi Arun
Good introduction but rephrase it, there are grammatical errors.
Work on headings, instead of writing ‘it’, mention the proper issue.
Body of the answer has decent content but need to work on conclusion, the conclusion must bring out the steps taken by the government to improve the conditions of the Ryotwari areas.
Try to add diverse points in your answer to fetch better marks.
Use subheadings also if possible.
Avoid grammatical errors.
Keep writing.
Please evaluate my answer.
Hi Yashwant
First thing, work on your handwriting, write neat and legible.
Content wise good attempt but need to work on few things.
Leave proper space between the lines and the paragraphs.
Refrain from monotony, use headings and subheadings .
Avoid grammatical and spelling errors.
Work on sentence formation, many of your sentences need to be rephrased.
Do not get demoralised by the marks, keep writing, you will succeed.