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The question wants us to dig deep into the issue discuss why Africa is important for India. We have to bring out the factors behind the infusion of energy in India-Africa relationship. Then we have to form a personal opinion on the issue.
In the introduction, write a few lines about the historic political, economic and cultural linkage between India and Africa. E.g trade relations between the Kingdom of Aksum and Ancient India around the first millennium; non-aligned movement; India-Africa Forum Summit etc.
In the main body, Discuss the nature of relationship between India and Africa, in terms of trade, until recently.
Explain the need for a reevaluation of our policy for African outreach – highlight the competition and how despite similar goals and challenges, India and Africa relations leave a lot to be desired.
Explain the challenges that India has to overcome and the strengths that India can leverage such as presence of Indian diaspora, huge experience in solving similar challenges at home etc
Discuss the changes made by India in its policy – India has tried to differentiate itself by engaging with its diaspora and private sector links to build development partnerships, India-Africa forums and is working with Japan on an Asia Africa Growth Corridor etc
Briefly discuss what more needs to be done.
Conclude the answer.
Answer:
India and Africa enjoy special relations with their ties inextricably linked by shared colonial past, geography, socio-economic similarities and common developmental challenges. India s ties with African states have grown rapidly in the past two decades. At the same time, India is also facing many challenges due to its competition with China, which has become one of the most critical factors for Indian diplomacy in Africa.
How India and Africa are Natural Partners:
India s carefully crafted diplomacy in Africa has brought positive results as no other country enjoys so much goodwill in Africa as India does
Both sides enjoy shared colonial past, dynamic present and promising future
India has much to gain from resource-rich regions of Africa as they can provide raw materials to India s industries
There is ample scope in energy cooperation as though Africa is rich in crude oil resources, its refining capacity is limited, that s precisely where India can step in with its much-advanced refinery sector
Growing market size and rising middle class can provide an alternate market for Indian products
The rising level of development and economic growth can provide investment opportunities to Indian entrepreneurs
Indian Diaspora can play an important political, economic, and social role
Why trade Relations Are Not At Their Optimal Best?:
India’s Africa trade policy over the past few decades has oscillated between passive and reluctantly reactive at best. Strategic apathy toward the continent was obvious on many fronts.
Most of the countries in Africa did not feature in India’s larger trade policy matrix, but until recently there wasn’t any significant attention paid to the continent.
Indian leaders seldom traveled to African nations .
India’s substantive trade presence in Africa has remained marginal as it focused on its own periphery through much of the Cold War period which limited its capabilities.
Since the end of the Cold War China’s presence has grown in Africa, who has been providing soft loans to African states which has resulted in Chinese growing influence in the continent.
With government institutions and businesses working in separate silos, India has no coordinated Africa policy nor does there seem to be an avenue where the strengths of both actors can be leveraged.
India is not alone in having an Africa-centered strategy. Our competitors on the continent, such the European Union, China, Japan and the U.S. also have IAFS-type processes and often commit even more resources than we do.
India s political and economic relations with African states have generally been overshadowed by the more prominent Sino-African relations
Economic ties with Africa are mainly left to private operators and middlemen in India
Security threats and conflicts in North Africa have brought to the fore the high risk nature of investments in the African region
Growing influence of Islamic state and other terrorist organisations also present risk for Indian investments
Piracy related concerns and kidnapping of the vessels in the littoral areas are also areas of concern for India
Gains made in trade relations in last couple of decades:
India became Africa’s fourth largest trading partner, with the trade turnover of $72 billion.
Third India-Africa Forum Summit in 2015:- The tempo set with the summit has been carried forward and sustained to a large degree. Currently, India’s forte in the continent has been developmental initiatives such as Indian Technical and Economic Cooperation (ITEC), Team 9, and Pan Africa e-network among others are aimed at building institutional and human capacity as well as enabling skills and knowledge transfer.
Indian businesses are active across geographic spaces and sectors in Africa. Agri-business, engineering, construction, film distribution, cement, plastics, and ceramics manufacturing, advertising, marketing, pharmaceuticals, and telecommunication are only some of the sectors that have Indian players.
Indian investment in Africa is also being ramped up, with over 140 Indian enterprises (from Wipro to Mahindra and Mahindra) investing over $4 billion in South Africa alone. Sub-Saharan African countries have also reached out to India to undertake rural electrification from financing and technology transfer, to detailed project reports and execution.
Years of diplomatic neglect of the continent is being addressed with the top echelons of Indian leadership regularly visiting the continent. Most notably, Indian president’s first overseas visit since taking office was to Djibouti and Ethiopia in October 2017.
Similarly, when Indian PM stopped by Mozambique during his four-nation tour of Africa making him the first Indian PM in 34 years to visit the country.
India has extended 152 lines of credit to the tune of almost $8 billion to 44 African countries, for developing agriculture, infrastructure, clean energy, and manufacturing.
Way forward:
New Delhi will need to start delivering on the ground if the India-Africa partnership has to move beyond high level visits.
Indian investments in Africa need to expand and diversify towards ‘broad’ range and not remain restricted to traditional sectors of investments.
In order to keep the momentum of building political and economic ties with this increasingly important region, steps should be taken towards tailoring and funding joint projects for the sustainable development of the Africa.
Sooner rather than later it has been realized in Indian economic and trading circles that Africa is a region that India cannot afford to ignore anymore which has been manifested in increasing bilateral and multilateral visits. Huge complementarities exist to strengthen bilateral collaboration in diverse areas and upgrade India-Africa engagement. It is high time that the goodwill enjoyed by India among African nations should be leveraged in our advantage through economic diplomacy.
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Do not repeat the line of the question as your intro.
Combine the 1st two paragraphs to make an unified intro.
“High population and High mortality has huge market potential”? Think before writing! That statement is insensitive at the least!
After intro, simply discuss the issues with trade ties between Africa and India and why it has been slow till recently?
What are the visible changes in recent times in terms of trade relations?
The whole discussion should be revolving around the trade issues and investments. Nothing else.
Make the diagram in the 1st part of the answer.
Read the model answer.
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Hi Sahithya
After intro, simply discuss the issues with trade ties between Africa and India and why it has been slow till recently?
What are the visible changes in recent times in terms of trade relations?
The whole discussion should be revolving around the trade issues and investments. Nothing else.
Avoid such lengthy paragraphs. That are not suited for UPSC mains pattern.
Try using bullet points.
Your direction is good but this answer’s presentation and structuring suits the demand of an essay but not GS answer.
Use bullet points and subheadings.
Read the model answer.
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You dont have to give all those dimensions in the discussion of India Africa being natural partners. Just focus on trade and economic relations.
Your whole discussion in the 1st part has been on the natural partner theme which should have been just a brief discussion.
After intro, simply discuss the issues with trade ties between Africa and India and why it has been slow till recently? What are the visible changes in recent times in terms of trade relations and what has driven those changes?
The whole discussion should be revolving around the trade issues and investments. Nothing else.
Good way forward.
read the model answer.
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Your way of grasping the demand of the questions are quite decent. Keep it up.
But there are some issues in the answer.
Your intro is g the 1st subheading is aptly discussed.
But the next two subheadings: “1. Reasons and 2. These are arising due to” are similar in nature in terms of discussion. So avoid repeating subheadings discussion which are similar in nature. In fact just use one subheading and keep discussion on.
Secondly your way forwards lack depth and are general in nature.
They need more points.
Read the model answer.
This would have been a very good answer if you would have focused on way forwards and conclusion.
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Hi Kanchan
Good intro.
You dont have to discuss those post independence ties in that much detail.
Instead focus on why in terms of trade and economic relationship, India and Africa are natural partners.
In terms of structure, the answer is weak and needs improvement.
Your discussion on the reasons for weak trade links should come just after the discussion of natural partner one.
You need to have more points in that discussion because that is the main theme of the question.
Make sure that you remain in the periphery of the demand of the question.
After intro, simply discuss the issues with trade ties between Africa and India and why it has been slow till recently? What are the visible changes in recent times in terms of trade relations and what has driven those changes?
The whole discussion should be revolving around the trade issues and investments. Nothing else.
What is the way forward and what India needs to do in future?
Read the model answer please.
Good conclusion.
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Decent discussion.
You have covered all the facets in satisfactory manner.
The explanation is good.
The coverage can be enlarged a bit but thats OK for now.
Decent way forwards.
Optimistic and well balanced conclusion.
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Hi Megha
Good start to the answer.
No need to discuss issues like education. Keep focus on trade.
After intro, simply discuss the issues with trade ties between Africa and India and why it has been slow till recently? What are the visible changes in recent times in terms of trade relations and what has driven those changes?
The whole discussion should be revolving around the trade issues and investments. Nothing else.
Good way forwards.
They are comprehensive and well explained.
Your presentation is very good. Use it your advantage.
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If the answer had a way forward then this would have been a near perfect answer in terms of content.
Your intro and main body are decently attempted.
Though you can curtail the length of your intro a bit.
But you need to give suggestions on how to improve the trade ties with Africa. R
read the model answer for that. That is an important elements of the question.
Improve your presentation.
Try not to over explain.
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Answer is good in terms of content and presentation.
Structure can be improved.
Points are good.
All in all decent attempt.
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