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- Write in a few introductory lines that there was a tremendous impact on agrarian system of the country.
- Question is straightforward and one has to detail upon the various agrarian changes that British brought into the country – Britishers’ introduced a new class of landlords called Zamindars who regarded land as their private property and aimed at obtaining maximum monetary gains out of it. Commercialization of agriculture became prominent. Better means of communication (equipped with rapid development of railways and shipping) made trade in agricultural products feasible, especially over long distances. There were also efforts made by the British to ‘improve’ Indian agriculture, during the 18th and 19th centuries etc.
- Conclude with balanced opinion that the efforts were both positive and negative and Indian agriculture even today hosts few features as the British rule legacy.
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Hi Geetanjali
First thing, complete your answer in maximum two pages as this is a 10 marker question .
Good introduction.
Refrain from monotony, use subheadings .
For example, you can write ‘Impact of British policies on Indian agrarian system’, under this heading give subheadings like-
-Overcrowding of agriculture
-Ruin of old zamindars
-Emergence of new zamindari class and jotedars etc.
This thing will help you in present your answer in a better structured mennr.
Content wise good attempt.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Divya
Good introduction.
In the impact part, need to add more points like-
-Overcrowding of agriculture
-Ruin of old zamindars
-Emergence of new zamindari class and jotedars etc.
Good conclusion.
A good attempt.
You have the potential of writing good answers, keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Somasis
Decongest your answer, leave some space between the lines and paragraphs.
Good introduction but need to summarise it, introduction should be crisp and concise.
Revolts were on the impacts, write other impacts like –
-Overcrowding of agriculture
-Ruin of old zamindars
-Emergence of new zamindari class and jotedars etc.
-Commercialisation of agriculture.
Need to diversify your content.
Work on presentation to fetch better marks.
Keep writing, you will improve.