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- https://www.financialexpress.
com/opinion/udan-has-failed- to-take-off-the-govt-must- give-it-a-relook/2019116/ - In the intro, briefly introduce UDAN scheme.
- In the body mention the provision of the scheme like the provision of cash subsidy and incentives. As issues with UDAN, mention lack of funds, the difference in intent versus impact in increasing connectivity in the NE region, only 26% routes being operated etc.
- Conclude by mentioning the potential of the scheme to enhance the regional connectivity by providing affordable air travel.
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Hi Uttam, rephrase your introduction,UDAN was launched as a regional connectivity scheme under the Ministry of Civil Aviation .
Explain briefly how UDAN has been integral to the country’s Civil Aviation Policy.
Then write the provisions and issues.
In the issues part, write about the capacity- India’s metro airports are largely choked and they have already run out of capacity in terms of landing and parking slots.
Lackluster conclusion, conclude by mentioning the potential of the scheme to enhance the regional connectivity by providing affordable air travel.
Improve your handwriting.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Dakshina
Rephrase your introduction.
Write under subheadings, it will make your answer better structured.
You have covered the challenges in a good manner but write about the infrastructure roadblocks also.
Write some solutions, you can write that there is need to address structural challenges,government should address these challenges- an inability to take on airport monopolies, a lack of focus on the demand side and attempting to address the chances of failures without adequately addressing the costs of failure.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Work on handwriting.
Keep working hard.
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Hi Chester
Good introduction.
You have written the provisions in a crisp manner, appreciable.
Need to add more points in issues part, mention lack of funds, the difference in intent versus impact in increasing connectivity in the NE region, only 26% routes being operated etc.
Good way forward.
Refrain from large paragraphs in the conclusion.
Avoid using unnecessary capital alphabets in between of a sentence.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Deepika
Good introduction.
You have covered the provisions of the scheme in a good manner.
Issues and suggested strategy are well explained.
Good conclusion.
Overall a decent attempt.
Persistence is the key to success, keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Amandeep
Leave some space between the paragraphs.
Good introduction.
Need to add more points in issues part, mention lack of funds, the difference in intent versus impact in increasing connectivity in the NE region, choked capacity of airports, only 26% routes being operated etc.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by mentioning the potential of the scheme to enhance the regional connectivity by providing affordable air travel.
Work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Improve the presentation to get better marks.
Work hard, you will improve.
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Hi Sumona
Good introduction.
Work on space management, write provisions and objectives in short, and focus on issues and measures.
Do not write just bullet points in the issues, explain them in one or two lines.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by mentioning the potential of the scheme to enhance the regional connectivity by providing affordable air travel.
Work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Avoid using short forms .
Avoid spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.
Keep writing,you will improve.
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Hi Mehul
Work on sentence formation, UDAN was launched as a regional connectivity scheme under the Ministry of Civil Aviation .
There is no need to write the provisions in such detail, write them in short, and focus on issues and measures.
In the issues part, you have written ‘structural challenges’ , explain these in few lines.
Conclusion is missing, conclude by mentioning the potential of the scheme to enhance the regional connectivity by providing affordable air travel.
Work on handwriting, write neat and legible.
Underline important stuff.
Keep writing!
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Hi PS
Good introduction.
You have explained the issues in a comprehensive manner, keep it up.
Measures are well explained.
The content is good and well placed.
A decent attempt.
Avoid using short forms like govt.
Avoid scribbling.
Scan your sheet in proper light.
Keep writing, you will succeed.
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Hi Teja
Scan your answer sheet in proper light.
Good introduction.
Provisions are explained in a good way.
Lack of content in issues
As issues with UDAN, mention lack of funds, the difference in intent versus impact in increasing connectivity in the NE region, only 26% routes being operated etc.
Lackluster conclusion, conclude by mentioning the potential of the scheme to enhance the regional connectivity by providing affordable air travel.
Underline important stuff.
Keep writing, you will improve.
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Hi Unnati
Good introduction.
You have explained the objectives and provisions of the scheme in a good manner.
Issues and measures are well explained.
Good conclusion.
You have the hold over content but need to improve presentation to get better marks.
Improve your handwriting, write neat and legible.
Give some space after paragraphs.
Keep working hard !